Question

HELP help me please!! I beg youuuu

I need you to fix this long sentence and make it into 4-5 shorter active sentences. try to use the subject in the front followed by definitive verbs please

-As I strolled up the Little Green path Towards his house, I thought about the peculiar way in which my brother had always blown bubbles with his gum, which mothers always admonished him for, and then without a moments notice he appeared in the stoop popping away as was his style as a youngster.

Answer 1

Slowly, I walked through the Little Green path. I was walked to his house when I started thinking about my brother. He would always blow bubbles with his gum, which mother hated dearly. Quickly after you could see him blowing his little pesky bubbles. He would blow the bubbles in the stoop, blowing loud bubbles as he was a youngster.

Explanation: I hope this works!