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Read the sentence.

When my cousin Jason suddenly showed up out of the blue, it was an unexpected surprise because we had no idea that he was coming to the special event that our family had planned ahead of time.

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Read the sentence. When my cousin Jason suddenly showed up out of the blue, it was-example-1
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Answer: We were surprised when my cousin jason attended our family reunion.

Step-by-step explanation: I took the k12 quiz and got it right.

User Connor McMahon
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The first sentence is correct.

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