Question

SOMEONE MAKE A ENDING PARAGRAPH about someone rescuing me QUICK 40 POINTS!!!!

It was just like any other morning. It was hot and the sun was gleaming. I was at a water park with my friends. Fast forward to 2 hours later, we are all getting ready to swim in the pool. This was going to be our first time swimming! Then suddenly, splash! I had slipped by accident, and before I knew it, I was in the deep end of the pool. Being 6 feet below, I couldn't get up and all I could see was leaves. Four minutes passed by as if they were years and I was just struggling to save my life. As time went by, the harder it became to try and make it out alive. No one could swim towards me. My life flashed before my eyes. Seeing my sister all alone made my stomach knot, and seeing my parents mourn over me was terrifying. The only thing I was thinking of was how I wanted to just be with them again, but soon I lost my strength and gave up. I started to become unconscious. The world went blurry as my eyes closed and the black blanket of darkness surrounded me. Time had stopped and I was stuck in its trap. I wanted to scream but I was paralyzed and frozen. All I want is just to go home. I closed my eyes and let myself inhale all the water until I became unconscious. Everything was pitch black.

Answer 1

Although, my life can't end here, life has so much more to offer me. I collected the last of my strength to swim up to to surface where I can be released from the horrors of the deep waters. I swallowed gulps of the chlorine water and my eyes ached from being open for to long. I wrestled the clenching fists of the water that urged me to stay with them. I swam, and swam, swam, until I reached my hands out for help, and that's when I knew I made it. I could feel hands from above grasping me and helping me climb out of the bitter cold pool. I ran into my mother's arms, as a gush of relief spread through my body. The relief of staying in my mothers arm, that helped me forget the isolated pits of the dark waters.

Sorry if it's not that good! I'm not the best writer, and you don't have to use this ending paragraph if you don't want to!!