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Can anyone help my poem I want to make it longer but I don’t know anything else for it

The man walked across the ground waiting for the very found sound he waits and triumphs when it’s done for he had taken a flower gun the flower screams in pain and and fall petals revolving in metal bars that infest the town while it crowns the suffering of the plants that have turned brown, while all the sounds bring attention to the pound while everyone woke up and stared at the mound?

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Sadness, sorrow, mixed emotion, death of beauty, what a notion

Crowning death, avenging, retaliation, taking back obliteration

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