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This poem is suppose to be a personification poem comparing but could anyone improve details or make it longer

The man walked across the ground waiting for the very found sound he waits and triumphs when it’s done for he had taken a flower gun the flower screams in pain and and fall petals revolving in metal bars

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The man walked across the ground waiting for the very found sound he waits and triumphs when it’s done for he had taken a flower gun the flower screams in pain and and fall petals revolving in metal bars that infest the town while it crowns the suffering of the plants that have turned brown, is this good or would you like a little more?

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