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Carroll writes that Alice and the Tweedles dance and sing
"Here We Go Round the Mulberry Bush" but then have
an awkward pause. He then writes, "Alice didn't know
how to begin a conversation with people she had just
been dancing with."
Talking was unnecessary
The characters felt uncomfortable.
The Tweedles preferred to sing,
Alice didn't know how to talk