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I wrote this song and I'm wondering if it is good or not?

Title: Stormy
Walking on a tightrope that nobody knows,
I'm out on my own,
I’ve known this for a while now,
I use music to help me get through every day,
With my past haunting me day in and day out,
I struggle every day cause you’re no longer here to help,
Walking on a tightrope that nobody knows, I’m out on my own,
I’ve known this for a while now,
I start the day sad and not wanting to get outta bed,
Cause I have to think about a life without you, but if I’m dreaming I don’t have to think,
I do get up though, even if I have to drag myself out of bed,
Walking on a tightrope, that nobody knows,
I'm out on my own,
I’ve known this for a while now,
I think about you all the time even if I don’t want to,
I remember what you used to say to me,
It helps me get through every day without you,
Walking on a tightrope that nobody knows,
I'm out on my own,
I’ve known this for a while now,
I read through our old text messages,
I listen to our old messages we used to put on each other's phones,
For when we needed a pick me up,
Your words help me get through every day,
Walking on a tightrope that nobody knows,
I’m out on my own,
I’ve known this for a while now,
Your words keep me moving forward,
And I hope in time we both end up in the same place,
I’ll be with you all the time,
Walking on a tightrope that nobody knows,
I’m out on my own,
Known this for a while now,

Is it good or not, I wrote this song, for my best friend that passed away her name is Stormy,

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5 votes
This is honestly amazing, great work!
User Marco Fontani
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Very good job bro keep at it :)))
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