Question

Read the following sentence from a cover letter.

I saw the advertisement for the customer service
representative while surfing the web the other day, and I
would really like to apply for the job.

What makes the style of this sentence ineffective?

A. The sentence is too formal.

B. The sentence is too wordy.

C. The sentence is too informal.

D. The sentence is too personal.​

Answer 1

C. The sentence is too informal

Answer 2

C

Step-by-step explanation:

The person you‘re talking to doesn’t need to know when and what you did to see the advertisement