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After feeling horrible for a week, the woman finally decided to see a doctor with a fever and a severe cough.

Which of these is the clearest and most effective way to revise the sentence above?
A.
The woman finally decided to see with a fever and a severe cough a doctor after feeling horrible for a week.
B.
After feeling horrible for a week, the woman with a fever and a severe cough finally decided to see a doctor.
C.
Finally, after feeling horrible for a week, the woman decided to see a doctor with a fever and a severe cough.
D.
The woman finally decided to see a doctor with a fever and a severe cough after feeling horrible for a week.

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Answer:

B. After feeling horrible for a week, the woman with a fever and a severe cough finally decided to see a doctor.

Step-by-step explanation:

A. This is wrong because it says she "finally decided to see with a fever and a severe cough a doctor." This does not make sense.

B. This is right because it clearly states that the woman had the symptoms.

C. It says that the woman "decided to see a doctor with a fever and a severe cough." LOL.

D. This one also is talking about the soman decided to see a doctor who is sick. LOLOLOLOLOLOL.

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