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Okay, so this has been a LONG time coming. Um i need to know if this is good. Thank you :D

it's called Remember.

it's been a year since the
last time that i heard your voice
I couldn't bear it, like a room
filled to the brim with noise.

And i now regret everything
that i did.
But i'm better now, not
just a kid.

And i have one thing to say....

it's that I REMEMBER those nights with you
stayed up til' 3 AM laughing since noon.
cause baby, you're special,
we cuddle, we wrestle.

Its that i REMEMBER those walks with you
staring up at the stars holding you.
you're the thing i cherish
til' the day i perish.

It's been a year since the
last time that i held your hand
now that you're here i
get to do it again.

an now i am smiling,
looking stupld,
but baby baby i'm crying,
cuzza you're kiss

It's been a year since the
last time that i held your hand
now that you're here i
get to do it again.
And i have one thing to say....

it's that I REMEMBER those nights with you
stayed up til' 3 AM laughing since noon.
cause baby, you're special,
we cuddle, we wrestle.

Its that i REMEMBER those walks with you
staring up at the stars holding you.
you're the thing i cherish
til' the day i perish.

i remember... everything
God, I remember,
very much remember..
my promise to you.

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I think its good, i think your all set
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Answer:

I’m sorry but you need to add more to it maybe more rhyming

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User Malaxeur
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