Question

Curfews have been used effectively in many towns to reduce crime. High school sophomore Mandy Jenkins says, "My parents don't really make me follow the curfew." Some towns report lower crime rates simply because of the location (such as a rural community ).

Which revision criterion could be used to improve this excerpt ?
A Coherence
B Word choice
C Grammar
D Punctuation

Answer 1

its coherence i just did the final

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Answer 2

I think it is coherence. because the statement about not following curfew doesnt make sense followed by the next sentence.