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It was a bright and sunny summer day, we were all hot and sticky. Swimming seemed a wonderful way to escape the heat. We decided. To go to the pool. Everyone looked forward to jumping into cool water. Soon the sounds of splashing water made us forget the heat. The sounds of laughing swimmers also made us forget the heat.

Which of the following would be a better way to write the underlined sentences?
A.
The pool is where we decided.
B.
Decided to go to the pool.
C.
We decided. It was the pool we wanted to go.
D.
We decided to go to the pool.

User Zeno Tsang
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D. The other answers are just nonsense.
User Mtok
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D. “We decided to go to the pool.”

A sounds weird, B is incomplete, and C has random periods, leaving D
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