Question

PLEASE HELP ME

. Read this paragraph from a student's short story.

From her bedroom window, five-year-old Evie watched with wide eyes. The dime-sized snowflakes fell. About eight inches of snow already covered the ground. It would reach above her belly button. She was not daunted. Evie began pulling her purple snow pants over her pajamas. The snowfall may have seemed ordinary to some people. To her it was Everest.

Combine the first two sentences into a single sentence. To do that, you'll need to revise one of the sentences so that it is a dependent clause.
Replace the noun It in the fourth sentence with a noun clause. Have fun with the clause you add—it's okay to add new details or change the meaning of the story!

Explain how each dependent clause you added affects the story.

Answer 1

Answer: To combine them yes you have to have dependent clause! So here is the paragraph fixed up.

Out her bedroom window, Evie watched with her eyes, While the snowflakes fell.

Explanation: The first one is for the Combine the Two sentence's, I cant properly figure out the Replace the noun It in the fourth sentence with a noun clause. I'm so sorry!

I really hope this helped and have a nice day!