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Can u pls give me advice about this speech? It's about importance of education. And pls correct mistakes.(I'm sure there's a lot xD)

Can u pls give me advice about this speech? It's about importance of education. And-example-1

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Answer:the 3 last paragraphs

Explanation:you used yourself as an example,the pronouns used should be 'i' . "choose" is repeated twice,use one with small letters

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