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Before traveling, the team reviews their itineraries to coordinate meeting locations and times.

Choose the best revision of the above sentence.
a. Before traveling, the team review their itineraries to coordinate meeting locations and times.
b. Before traveling, the team reviews their itineraries, coordinating meeting locations and times.

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Answer:

B). Before traveling, the team reviews their itineraries, coordinating meeting locations and times.

Step-by-step explanation:

As per the question, the sentence that best revises the given sentence is displayed through option B and i.e. 'Before traveling, the team reviews their itineraries, coordinating meeting locations and times' as it is correctly punctuated and rectifies the incorrect use of preposition in the original sentence. The use of a comma(,) to demarcate the series of items like 'itineraries', 'coordinating meeting locations' is apt and the removal of unnecessary preposition 'to' in the original sentences comprehends the essence of the statement. Therefore, option B is the correct answer as the option A carries a subject-verb agreement error(use of plural verb 'review' with the singular noun 'the team').

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