Question

"I don’t remember the year but it was either 2013/14; we were having breakfast at the Serena Hotel, Islamabad. As I went up to grab my omelet, I saw Ali whiz past me. I was about to walk up to him when my mom grabbed me and said, “What if he is not Ali? Everything will become awkward then. Just sit and eat your breakfast.” After that, I found out that it was HIM. If only my mom would have taken a leap of faith."

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Answer 1

"I don’t remember the year but it was either 2013/14; we were having breakfast at the Serena Hotel, Islamabad. As I went up to grab my omelet, I saw Ali whiz past me. I was about to walk up to him when my mom grabbed me and said, “What if he is not Ali? Everything will become awkward then. “Just sit and eat your breakfast.” After that, I found out that it was HIM. If only my mom would have taken a leap of faith.