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Depression poem

I hate you and it won't change, for what you do is not worth my pain if i could k.i.l.l you i really would, cause whats inside of me could really hurt, you used me and hurt me and didn't even care in the end you left me in grief and took away all my belief, what id i even do to deserve so much hate all i ever did was give you all my faith but it seems to me no matter how much pain comes to me you don't even look in my direction because all you care about is your reflection, despite all the effort I make you still manage to take my breathe away, you don't know the pain you put me through, and days i didn't even sleep just know I forgive you and i really don't care anymore because i don't have to waste my time on people who don't love me....

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It sounds good. Well not good but well written. "Not good" as in I understand what you are going through. I am going through a possibly similar situation.

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Good, but you need to capitalize letters and more metaphors and similes
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