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What is the best revision for these sentences without changing their original meaning?

The Grand Canyon is a stunning sight. It is most beautiful at sunset. The sun's rays are red then. The sunlight brings
out the reddish colors of the rock.
The Grand Canyon is stunning at sunset; red rays and red rocks.
The sun's rays on the rocks at sunset at the Grand Canyon are beautiful and
red
The Grand Canyon is a stunning sight, especially at sunset, when the red
rays of the sun accentuate the myriad red tones in the rock
When the sunsets at the Grand Canyon, the rocks and the sun's rays.

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Answer:

c

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Answer:

C

Step-by-step explanation:

i got it right

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