Question

Retype these sentences, making them smoother by changing the parts that are in Paréntesis.

When I was, (oh, around) eight years old, I thought it would be fun to learn to play the piano. My parents agreed to
purchase a piano. They told me that I would be required to practice one hour a day, (due to the fact that) piano lessons were expensive. At first, I practiced piano for two hours each day, (with the result that) progressed very rapidly. Every day for two years I raced home (when) school (was) done and practiced the piano with great enthusiasm. Then one day,
something happened. I decided I liked baseball better than the piano. Though I can play the piano rather well (at the
present time), I do not practice as long nor as diligently as I once did.

Answer 1

When I was around eight years old, i thought it would be fun to learn to play the piano. My parents agreed to purchase a piano. They told me that i would be required to practice one hour a day because lessons were expensive. at first, i practiced piano two hours a day, so i progressed very rapidly. every day for two years, i raced home whenever school was done and i practiced piano with great enthusiasm. then one day, something happened. i decided that i liked baseball better that the piano. though i could play the piano better the , i did not practice as long or as diligently as i once did. :))