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Write a narrative paragraph about an unforgettable incident form your life. given a catchy title to your paragraph and begin it with an impressive topic sentence. make sure that your paragraph is both cohesive and coherent

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Title: 501 my Unforgettable lesson

Please drive slow, someone always waiting for you at home, I learnt this after my road accident while riding a motorcycle. It was a rainy day, I was going for my summer camp tuition classes. As usual while putting my headphones on, my father told me about how unsafe it was to drive with a loud music and forbidden me from over speeding which I used to do. But like every time I didn't put an ear on his advice, and just went out. That was when i learnt that lesson.

On my way back home after my tuition class, as road became very much slippery due to rain but I realized it after my unforgettable incident. I was rushing towards home for no obvious reasons while listing to my favorite songs on full volume. There was a government building near by summer camp with the board written 501 on it . While crossing it in speed, couldn't listen the horn that a car was honking at me, i just took a wrong decision by overtaking a huge truck without knowing what was coming from the other side collapsed into another motorcycle. And that happened due to my over speeding as i lost control while pushing brake and my motorcycle crashed into another motorcycle coming from the opposite side. It was not a normal accident. The other guy was dead at the moment due to excessive blood lose from his head injury and luckily I just escaped an inch from the death by rolling off from the road. Otherwise I surely could have been crushed by that car which was behind me. After that people took me and called the ambulance. I was admitted in ICU immediately.... and it took me two months to get completely recovered. But whenever I remember this accident which took place in front of the building 501 it gives me goosebumps and a unforgettable lesson to drive slow all the time.

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