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Decide which problem is illustrated by the

following sentence:
Many magazines, especially those which
regularly run full-color picture stories of
stars and personalities who are currently
in the news, have had financial troubles
lately.

User Huiyi
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2 Answers

1 vote

Answer:

wordiness its would have to be :)

Step-by-step explanation:

User Denkweite
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Answer:

Wordiness

Step-by-step explanation:

The sentence uses more words to convey its meaning.

The sentence could be changed into something like this,

"Magazines which regularly run full-color picture stories of stars, currently in the news, are facing financial troubles."

There could also be some other similar version of the sentence offering the same meaning with fewer words.

User Mukul Jangir
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