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I need input on this vignette:

Saying Bye
I remember the last day of school, June 11, 2019 to be precise, and how I had to say bye to my friends. I’ve never been a big fan of byes because you never know which one is your last bye. Who knows what could happen to you an hour, a minute later. There was this one girl that I had met at the start of that year. She and I were best friends, me throwing insults at her and her throwing insults back. We were always joking, obviously. We were like sisters, always with each other and having the same mind.
Anyways, it was the last day of school. My best friend was moving to Massachusetts. Our whole friend group was upset because it wouldn’t be the same without our bickering:
“You’re stupid.”
“Yeah? Well, you’re the one who got a 2 in math.”
Oh yeah? Who got a 1 in English?”
“So?”
“Yeah, so?”
On the last day of school, right when the bell rang, everyone ran out of the classrooms. I did too, because come on. It’s the start of summer. Me and my whole friend group all walked together until we got to my bus. We all hugged each other, but didn’t say bye, because as I said before, I’ve never been a big fan of byes because you never know which one is your last bye. My best friend said one last insult to me:
“Don’t be a stupid".
“Don’t be an IDIOT is what you mean”.
“Yeah, yeah. Whatever”.
''See, this is why you got that 1 in English”.
Our friend group then all went separate ways. We never saw that girl again.

Answer 1

I really like that short story, but I do have some advice. I think in the title and the story, you should say "goodbye" instead of "bye", because it sounds more professional, unless of course just "bye" by itself has a significant meaning to your story. Another thing to improve would be adding some names to the story, even if they're not the names in real life. Especially at the end, instead of saying "that girl", adding an actual name would give it a more dramatic effect :)

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Answer 2

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