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What is the best way to combine

these sentences?
The niece stared through the open
window. A look of shock and
surprise suddenly appeared on
her face.
A. Staring through the open window, the niece
suddenly looked shocked and surprised.
B. The niece stared through the open window,
and, suddenly she had a look of shock and
surprise.
C. The niece was staring through the window
looking shocked and surprised.

1 Answer

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Answer:

A. Staring through the open window, the niece

suddenly looked shocked and surprised.

Step-by-step explanation:

It sounds more professional.

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