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Change the following sentence into a strong thesis statement;

Portecting the environment is important.​

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Answer:

Protecting the environment is important because of... (insert reasons here).

Or, The environment needs to be protected because of (insert reasons here).

Step-by-step explanation:

The thesis statement should provide a basis for your essay to be written upon. There should be reasons included in the thesis statement, and each reason should make up a portion of the essay.

For example, if you had to write an essay with 4 paragraphs, or one introduction paragraph, two body paragraphs, and one conclusion paragraph, you would need to include two reasons in your thesis statement.

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