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Is there any way to reword my sentence if it does not show the correct parallel structure?

"In my English courses this semester, I have noticed that my essays contain fewer transitional words, regular comma splices, and untidy parallel structures."

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Yes, use more word like therefore, however, or moreover. By using word like this and add more to your sentence will help the flow be more clear. I hope this help you out.

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