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Did you know that it is possible to survive natural disasters in your hometown? Although

many natural disasters seem to be impossible to survive, there are a few things that people
can do to increase their chances of surviving a natural disaster. People can survive natural
disasters by being prepared and staying aware. There are many reasons to support this. What is wrong with this paragraph?

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Answer:

Lack of punctuation (commas) and the use of capital letters. (Unless told) Never start off your paragraph with a question.

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