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Too many sentence fragments in your writing might:

make your readers think that you can't write well
make readers wonder what's happening
confuse your reader with too many incomplete thoughts
any of the above
Its number 3

User Elmorabea
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Yu would have to break it down so it not to descriptive. Or they will think it’s to boring.
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