Question

Can anyone please help me asap? thank u in advance.

Rewrite this passage replacing the underlined words with more interesting alternatives ( my teacher said you can change the whole sentence too if you want, the underline words r just the minimum).



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Answer 1

You need to find synonyms for the words. Thats a way you can find good alternatives.

Step-by-step explanation

It was a beautiful sunny day. Down by the amazing stream a cute blue bird sat chanting extraordinary sounds. The bright sun rose high in the blue sky. "oh, how amazing it is to have such a gorgeous day all to myself," I thought.

Then, a evil bird flew along. From the shape of its scary wings and its log legs, I knew it swooped with awful news. It carried a evil sort of bag over its wing. "Who knows what horrifying stuff it has inside?" I thought.

The amazing bird soon stopped making gorgeous sounds, and flew away quickly. I should have done the same. The evil bird swooped and landed on me. Even though it was a evil bird, it was good to have a friend. I took the purse off his wing, and the inside was a horrible message.It said, " horrible adjectives make for horrible writing. You had better write them with more amazing words. That meant, I knew, I had to do an abundance amount of work.

Please go over it for any grammer or spelling mistakes!