Question

Please help! Can someone who speak Spanish look over this and tell me if it makes sense? It’s kind of like a little story but the grammar may be off, so just let me know of any corrections I need to make , thank you! <3

Answer 1

As a Spanish speaker this looks great keep up the great work <33

Answer 2

It looks fine to me i think there is some mistakes but u can like change the language on word to see the mistakes, as a spanish speaker it looks fine