What is the main problem with this conclusion paragraph?
Thesis statement:
Students in middle school should be allowed to use study hall periods
however they choose.
Main points:
If students have homework, they can choose to do it.
Students who need some quiet time can relax (or draw or listen to
music, for example).
The school can maintain a calm, quiet environment.
Conclusion:
As you can see, there are many reasons to allow students the freedom
to choose how they spend study hall periods. While they may decide to
do schoolwork, they are old enough to know when they just need a
break. This is an easy change that would bring great benefit to Hoover
Middle School
A. It is missing one of the main points.
B. It adds new information
C. It does not restate the thesis.
D. It does not have a satisfying close,