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It had come at last - the morning I had waited for, for so long. It had just turned eight, the time the train came. The train let out a loud, terrifying noise. “Train 125 just showed up.” A worker shouted, telling us it’s time. I grabbed my bag from the ground, carried it onto the train and sat down on a seat.

Across from me, there was a woman and her kid with her. The baby was making a boisterous sound. It was loud, most likely annoying other passengers. “Please quiet your child, I’m on an important call.” A passenger with long, blackish-brownish hair and circular glasses said. The woman apologized on behalf of her rambunctious baby.

(There are 120 words, but please do add an interesting ending or edit this!)

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