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Every night, my father and I read a story before bed, he does the best character voices.

Which of the following fixes the error?

Every night, my father and I read a story, before bed and he does the best character voices.
Every night, my father and I read a story before bed. He does the best character voices.
Every night, my father and I read a story before bed he does the best character voices.
Every night, my father and I read a story before bed, so he does the best character voices.

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Answer:

The second one

Step-by-step explanation:

Every night, my father and I read a story before bed. He does the best character voices.

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Answer:

Every night, my father and I read a story before bed. He does the best character voices.

Step-by-step explanation:

It makes sense that these are separated into two sentences. without any pause, this would be a run-on sentence. Adding the word "and" also makes it a run-on sentence. The comma before "bed" in the last one is in the wrong place.

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