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29. Which details should the writer add before sentence 6 to best help readers imagine how the author physically feels when she opens the attic door

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Answer:As I stepped into the room, a cold breeze brought me chills and a cloud of dust burst into the air as I coughed and gasped for fresh air; I was convinced no one had been in this room for ages and I was the first explorer.

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i belive this is right!

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Answer: yes

Explanation:so it can be more cooler and more action in the story

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