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Can someone help me with this-example-1
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Answer:

Here are the 10 mistakes I found (they're out of order bc I read it a few times)

Step-by-step explanation:

1) making is spelled wrong (it says makeing)

2)should say: it tastes so good (it says "it's tasting so good")

3) should give a certain measurement of cinnamon (it says "a few cinnamon")

4) should say: now I add, or will add, the oatmeal (it says "now I adding the oatmeal")

5) should give a measurement of brown sugar ( it says "I add a few brown sugar")

6) should say: next, I pour the ingredients in the blender (it says " next, I'm pour the ingredients")

7) should say one hour ( it says "one hours")

8) should say a bowl of or something like that (it says a "tall glass of avena", but avena is oatmeal)

9) should say avena is oatmeal ( it says "a cold drink with sugars")

10) should say milk (it says "four cups of milks")

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Today in mmm making a new recipe. We call it Avena in Spanish. It’s a cold drink with sugars. It tastes so good. You need one cup of oatmeal, four cups of milk, one half cup of brown sugar, and some cinnamon. Let’s get started. First, I get out a large pot. Next, I put the milk in the pot and bring it to boil. Now, I add the oatmeal. It smells so good. Now I add some brown sugar and a sprinkle of cinnamon. I love the cinnamon smell. Next, I pour the ingredients in the blender and blend them. Now, I put it in the fridge for one hour. After one hour, you can enjoy a tall glass of Avena.
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