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Which revision, if any, fixes the bolded part of the sentence?

My grandmother, who lives in Virginia, my cousin, who lives in Milwaukee; and my aunt, who lives in San Diego, are all flyin
here for my Bat Mitzvah.
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My grandmother, who lives in Virginia; my cousin, who lives in Milwaukee; and my aunt, who lives in San Diego,
O My grandmother, who lives in Virginia, my cousin, who lives in Milwaukee, and my aunt, who lives in San Diego,
My grandmother, who lives in Virginia, my cousin; who lives in Milwaukee, and my aunt; who lives in San Diego,

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Answer:

My grandmother, who lives in Virginia; my cousin, who lives in Milwaukee and my aunt, who lives in San Diego, are all flying here for my Bat Mitzvah.

Step-by-step explanation:

Resource Used: Grammarly

I copied and pasted the original sentence into Grammarly. The first suggestion it gave me was to fix the spelling of "flyin(g)." Once I did this, there was one premium suggestion. The premium suggestion said the punction in compound/complex sentence(s) was an issue. Specifically, they underlined the name Milwaukee and the semicolon next to it. As you can see, you can notice the adjustments that Grammarly approved.

I hope this helps you in any shape or form.

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