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PLS HELP!! Is this Grammatically correct?

“We made our way to the amusement park while hearing the main attraction, The Kraken, screech.”

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yes it is correct. According to previous work
User Moszeed
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I say yes. I read it out loud to myself and checked the grammar. It sounds correct
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