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Which is the grammatically correct and best way to split up this run-on: i want to start a band with my friends because i like writing songs on the piano and my friend mia is really good at singing and rapping jorge is an amazing drummer and singer and kylie is a great dj and good at mixing tracks.

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i want to start a band with my friends because i like writing songs on the piano and my friend mia is really good at singing and rapping and jorge is an amazing drummer and singer and kylie is a great dj and good at mixing tracks.

i want to start a band: i like writing songs on the piano; and mia is really good at singing and rapping; and jorge is an amazing drummer and singer; and kylie is a great dj: good at mixing tracks.

i want to start a band with my friends because i like writing songs on the piano. my friend mia is really good at singing and rapping, and jorge is an amazing drummer and singer. also, kylie is a great dj and good at mixing tracks.

i want to start a band. with my friends. because i like writing songs. on the piano. my friend mia is really good. at singing. and rapping. jorge is an amazing drummer. and singer. and kylie. a great dj. good at mixing tracks.

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Answer:

the 3rd

Step-by-step explanation:

The first one is a run on, the second uses an improper colon and 4th is break off sentences

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Answer:

The third one

Step-by-step explanation:

i want to start a band with my friends because i like writing songs on the piano. my friend mia is really good at singing and rapping, and jorge is an amazing drummer and singer. also, kylie is a great dj and good at mixing tracks.

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