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! enjoy riding my bike. I get great exercise and can enjoy the outdoors. Fresh air is important

to me. Bikes have always
interested me since I was a young child; I rode a bike without training wheels at 3 years old. Biking is a way for me to take my
mind of things and relax, while benefiting my health.
Not all activities that benefit my health are enjoyable. Weightlifting is awful. I know I need to get stronger, but it is very
boring. I get claustrophobic and antsy. My ambition to lift weights is very low, though I know it is important for me to
How do I revise this?

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Answer:

so first fix your I because it is placed with a !

Step-by-step explanation:

you have a couple of mistakes in your sentence that's what i am trying to tell you.

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