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The 19-year-old pianist and composer performed his most recent work all over Europe, Asia, and North America last year, winning prestigious awards in both London as well as Tokyo for his achievement at so young an age, and he is hoping to continue composing now that he has returned to Chicago.

A. winning prestigious awards in both London as well as Tokyo for his achievement at so young an age, and he is hoping.
B. winning prestigious awards both in London and Tokyo for his achievement at such a young age, and hoping.
C. having won prestigious awards both in London and Tokyo for his achievement at so young an age, hoping.
D. winning prestigious awards in both London and Tokyo for his achievement at such a young age, and he hopes.
E. having won prestigious awards both in London as well as Tokyo for his achievement at so young an age, and he hopes.

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Answer:

The Answer is D

Step-by-step explanation:

Both the problems in the original sentence have been corrected. Also, “so young an age” (which I didn’t like but didn’t have the reasons to counter) has been replaced by (much better looking) “such a young age”.

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