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Which revision best reduces wordiness in this sentence?

Backpacking in nature can be an enriching experience and can
give hikers the opportunity to learn to be self-reliant.
A. Change "Backpacking in nature can be an enriching experience and" to
"hiking."
O B. Change "can be an enriching experience" to "can be fun."
C. Change "self-reliant" to "independent."
O D. Change "the opportunity to learn to be self-reliant" to "self-reliance."

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Answer:

C.

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