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Can someone tell me if this sounds good or if it doesn’t, and give opinions on what I would need to change or stay :P

Can someone tell me if this sounds good or if it doesn’t, and give opinions on what-example-1
User Keeno
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Sounds pretty good! I would suggest to check your final answer for any errors, overall you expressed yourself very nicely!
User Moonfly
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It’s sounds pretty good to me maybe you should add another sentence or not it’s already good to me though :)
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