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Example how to write an essay about yourself and the people around you

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Answer: The essay should talk about yourself first and then it should introduce other people around you and how you view them and what do you think about them

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My name is Jane and I love arts and craft. I have two siblings named Amara, my youngest sister, and my oldest sister, Natalie. I am really into romance. I love watching romantic movies and read romantic books. I have two beautiful friends named Layla and Lia who are sisters. They have helped me so much in my life that I can never return the favor back to them. I have a crush on this one boy in my class name Eric who is insanely cute and my friends always push me to go and talk to him. I would love to talk to him but I get nervous every time I try to talk to him (you don't necessarily have to write about your crush and if you don't have one then you can write about someone you admire but again you don't necessarily have to do that).

(In this second paragraph, you are going to introduce the people around you like your friends, your siblings, your parents, your grandparents and so on) My friend Layla is a very athletic person. She always joins any kind of sports team at school and also outside of school. She has helped in a lot of things. She helped me finish my project once and also helped me with a homework of mine which I couldn't understand. I admire her kindness towards people and how she helps almost anyone. I also love how she is so talented (basically you are going to introduce your person and also mention some things you admire about them. if you want, you can also tell your reader about a moment you had with your person).

(In the third paragraph, you introduce your second person and write similarly about this person like you wrote for your person in your second paragraph) My friend Lia, Layla's sister, is really obsessed with music. She loves to sing and has an amazing voice for it as well. She always helps me whenever I am trying to decide what type of project to do. She helps me brainstorm ideas quickly. I admire how open minded and friendly she is with almost everyone. I also love how she is so talented in singing (you can write anything you want about this person in your paragraph, whether you like them or not)

(This is your conclusion paragraph. This is where you write additional stuff about you and your person(s) like example if you have any type of fears or if your person(s) have any type of fears or what do you both like to do together and what you both hate to do) I have a fear of clowns similar to my friend Lia. We both hate clowns because they look and act strange and they look very creepy. Me and my friend Layla both love Christmas a lot. We both like to give presents to each other. Me, Lia and Layla all love Sci-Fi movies. They just look so real yet they are quite not real. (This is where you give your thesis statement which is basically saying the main point of this essay) In conclusion, I love both of my friends. Even if they are different from each other, I still love both of them equally (your thesis statement can be anything, as long as if it relates to the text).

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