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What is a good thesis statement for the topic of “People are influenced by their environment and those around them”?

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It depends on the type - research, explanatory, informative, or argumentative. But a proper thesis sentence for this topic looks like this, “People are influenced by the things and people around them negatively because of societal pressure.”

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This is the best that I got.

The influence of certain environments and the influence of others can greatly impact a person.
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