I need someone to check my grammar on my poem please A dark place say goodbye tear stained, blood stained you once promised me infinity a dying rose on the table, a silver heart not but a tear not but

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I need someone to check my grammar on my poem please

A dark place

say goodbye
tear stained, blood stained
you once promised me infinity
a dying rose on the table, a silver heart
not but a tear
not but a gift

English
high-school

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Seems pretty good.

Maybe instead of "tear stained, blood stained" you do

tear stained; blood stained

Dimmerg answered Oct 4, 2023

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