Question

Select the more effective sentence.

Now that I look back on it, I guess that last year at Grandma's place, I had the best Thanksgiving that I ever did have in all my life.
Looking back on it, I believe Thanksgiving at Grandma's place last year was the best I ever had.

Answer 1

The second one ," Looking back at it, I believe Thanksgiving at Grandma's place last year was the best I ever had.

Step-by-step explanation:

The first one is informal and includes too much unnecessary info. like "now that", and "ever did have in all my life" (could me shortened to the best I ever had

Answer 2

The second one ," Looking back at it, I believe Thanksgiving at Grandma's place last year was the best I ever had.

Step-by-step explanation:

The first one is informal and includes too much unnecessary info. like "now that", and "ever did have in all my life" (could me shortened to the best I ever had).