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Hi guys, I was just wondering how you think this writing piece is going. I was assigned to write about any object but I had to personify it.

Hi guys, I was just wondering how you think this writing piece is going. I was assigned-example-1
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Answer:

Spell check on line 9, otherwise it looks pretty good! Maybe try adding some extra detail to set the scene?

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It looks good actually and interesting as well

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