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Read the sentence. Many people watched the sunset. Which is the best way to revise this sentence using descriptive detail and sensory words?

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Answer:

There are many ways to approach this question here is one:

Step-by-step explanation:

"Many people gazed at sunset's alluring ombre glow of yellow, orange, and pink as it set, with such awe."

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