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can someone please make sure this poem sounds right? lmk if i should change anything (it has to relate to the picture
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can someone please make sure this poem sounds right? lmk if i should change anything (it has to relate to the picture

can someone please make sure this poem sounds right? lmk if i should change anything-example-1
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I think stanza one is great. Stanza two could use a bit of revising - I like the idea of the farmer providing for his family, though.

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