Can someone please make sure this poem sounds right? lmk if i should change anything (it has to relate to the picture

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asked May 11, 2023 208k views

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Msal · Answer 1 · 2023-05-16T09:58:45+0000

I think stanza one is great. Stanza two could use a bit of revising - I like the idea of the farmer providing for his family, though.