How should I rewrite this sentence so it sounds better especially the last part because it sound weird :) The document states direction for usage, refills,and how records should be recorded.

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How should I rewrite this sentence so it sounds better especially the last part because it sound weird :)

The document states direction for usage, refills,and how records should be recorded.

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The way you write it is so good! it's not weird and it's sensible! No need to rephrase it.

Ismael Vacco answered Jan 12, 2023

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