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At first, I didn't have much interest in the house my great-uncle had left me. I was comfortable living in the city. When I received the deed, however, I decided that I should at least give the place a quick inspection before I sold it. When I drove up, the place looked like something out of horror movie: an old, rotting Victorian mansion with turrets and cobwebs. I stepped inside, took one look at the spooky interior and turned around to leave.

Which final sentence to the paragraph would likely create the most suspense?
A."Not this time, ghosts!" I shouted as I left the place.
B. I then drove straight to the nearest real estate office
C. That's when I realized the door had locked behind me.
D. I screamed an ran from the house as fast as I could.

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Answer:

C. That's when I realized the door had locked behind me

Step-by-step explanation:

the point which I chose is most likely to create mystery and puts the reader in curiousity and wants more. This type of sentence is a proper and more suitable cliffhanger to the story. WHAT HAPPENS NEXT will the the readers first thought

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